So,i 'm hoping being white don't discredit me, but i think you should take that percussion to the next level, i have seen live performers use instruments you notmally wouldnt see used, just by adding a mic to it, take that table you use, put a mic on it, put mics on whatever you use to make beats, and do that shit live, freestyle, in venues, and that's your selling point. You don't need beats programs to make it, your natural percussive skill is what sets you apart from the rest, and the way you create beats sets you apart from everyone else who is using a computer to create music, fuck that, mic your shit, hit up venues, do it live, bring your fuckin lighter, pencil, table, mic that shit,, make it hit bass, all day!
dude got the ill voice (singing and rapping), dope flow, crazy punchlines, vivid writing and meaningful metaphors. The rap game is waaaay oversaturated with cats that only talk about the drug game, but unlike a lot of the clown-ass-non-rapping-rappers you hear on the radio, this brother got serious skills and potential. I hope he make it.
I'm still listening to this today. I been through so much in my life so far, from the projects, death of family members and a Iraq and Afghanistan vet the hook just resonate with my soul, POWERFUL!!!!
He wast talking about a girl he was talking about streets the beat is clean as shit the sound is clean just listen to it close he is coming up just give him a lol bite he will make it to the top shout out to dondada keep going bro you are doing good